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This story was published before as a fan fiction. In this version, all characters are original and made by me, but act out people in real life that I have met. Some situations might be real and some just made so it looks funny or cute.
This story is formed as a Role Play. Every moment of happening is written as a line of a character saying or doing something. First, the symbol of their type is written, then their name and a collon. After the collon, the text tells what they're saying. If the text is written in stars, it's an action. It's written in a special form alike to Present Simple so don't get confused.
I know lots of people on this site know what this is, but I wrote this in case some newbies to this site and to the internet in general don't understand this.
Items in the RP will have a '^' before they start doing something. Comments and descriptions will have '//', people appearing on a TV or heard from phone '#' and people appearing outside the fourth wall of the projection will have '+'.

+Narrator: This is a story about a nostalgic foxcat from Shestero who was picked on by his classmates for his difference. How is he gonna handle it? What is his luck? It's time for you to meet Turag Guardow. *opens the map of Shestero and aims at Turag's home, then opens a video* The videos are recorded in English, even though the people speak another language. Enjoy :)

^Video: *showing date* 5. 5. 2010.

^Time: 6:45

^Phone: *ringing*

Turag: mnnmnm >-< *gets up from dreams* uugghh *gets the phone and instead of pressing the snooze button, presses turn off*

^Phone: The alarm has been turn off.

^Time: 7:40

Turag: *wakes up* uhhh... *opens eyes and looks at the phone*

^Phone: 7:41

Turag: Oh fudge, not again! *quickly jumps off the bunk bed onto my paws, gets clothed, a dark green shirt with horizontal textures, darker green trousers and black shoes*

// The foxcat has big brown paws. From his knees, up his body, to the end of his hands and his neck was all dark blue. The middle of his tail was brown. The brown explosion on his chest is the brown of his chest fur which is runs out of his muzzle. The head is a orange and covered with the hanging scruffy quills with brown intersection. His nose is a bit extended. His eyes are brown as well. His ears are scruffy.

Turag: *gets to the kitchen to eat cereal up very fast, then grabs the school backpack and runs out*

// Later as he was jumping with his high jumps to the school which was already visible from the entrance of his building.

Turag: *jumping to the white walled school with one floor and a blue roof on the top*

Ivana: It's Turag! :D

Turag: *made it*

Ivana: You're late!

Turag: Yea I noticed that before you

Ivana: *laughs a bit*

Turag: What's so funny? *gets serious*

Ivana and Avox and Helena and Mateya: You're late haha you're late.

Turag: Shut up! ><

// The annoyed foxcat walked ashamed through the open door of the school.
// As the class starts, 30 pupils are sitting in their seats quietly watching the teacher...

Teacher: Hello. Today we are going to discuss gravity and potential energy

Turag: *gasps, falls off the chair because he was in a swinging position*

Everyone: Hahahahahaha XDDD

Turag: stupid gravity -.-

Everyone: *laughs even more*

Teacher: *begins with one of those catchphrases* If you don't stop the vibration of your throat and the sound it's producing, I will be forced to give you an exam to write.

Everyone: *stops*

Howard: Yea, right.

// The blue and red donkey with a deep voice said to provoke some laugh.

Teacher: Howard!

Howard: What?

Everyone: *laughs at the expression of Howard*

Teacher: *gives a nasty smile and gets the pupils the tests*

Everyone: *stops and gets worried*

Teacher: *giving tests slowly*

Everyone: *gets one*

// Later when they all finished the test

Teacher: *walked to Turag's table and said* Turag

Turag: Huh? *looks up, wondering*

Teacher: What is this? *reads from Turag's test* F=F1+F2+F3, 3*3=6

Everyone: *laughs at Turag for the funny mistake*

// The foxcat's ears went up, eyes opened wide and as he quickly got up to say something, it looked very funny.

Turag: That's because I wasn't concentrated! I know that 3*3=9, but... *gets interrupted*

Everyone: Yeah yeah yeah *inaudible speech*

Turag: >.< *due to the lack of vocabulary and patience, says this* SHUT UP! I WOKE UP TOO LATE I COULDN'T RELOAD MY BRAIN WELL! ... uhh.... *realized what he just said*

Everyone: *laughs even more at Turag's yet another expression*

Turag: *feels so embarrassed and sits down*

// When the laughs were finished and the grades were written in, the class was over

Turag: *walking with Howard and approaches a few people* I can't believe they don't want to LET ME SAY WHAT I WANT TO SAY!

People: *look at Turag*

Turag: ....

Someone: Idiot. XD

Turag: *grabs that someone and starts threatening* You have no idea who I am! Shut up! *puts them down*

Howard: Hey hey hey stop, Turag. *looks at someone* he has a bad day.

Turag: NO! Not a bad day, bad days...

Howard: *tries to shut Turag up* nevermind, bye ^^'''''

Turag: Let me go! >:c

Howard: Don't do that, it's not good.

Turag: Yeah, everything is not good >:c *walks away to somewhere else*

Turag: *sees Helena* lookin' cute :3

Helena: err, that ain't gonna work.

Turag: I dun care, you're cute, but... I WANNA HUG X3 *hugs Helena and uses his power of affection*

Helena: *giggles as she doesn't know what to say* ... that was.. ugh *looks confused* stupid

Turag: No you're st...

// The foxcat realized what he just said without watching his tongue and also realized that his catchphrase will cost him much

Helena: D:<

// After Helena did her move which was 1 minute later...

Avox: :) What happened Turag? *looking at him and smirks*

Turag: *comes up moving heavily because Helena hogtied him* she doesn't like hugs because she's xenophobic >:c

Avox: Who?

Turag: *tries to remember her name, but can't* ummm... Helena

Avox: awww don't hug girls like that kind of hugging, they don't like it.

Turag: Awwwhh and why do they like to hug others?

Avox: I dunno *unties Turag*

Turag: thank you, by the way I really enjoyed the moment when she tied me up, I dunno why X#3

Avox: I dunno o.o

// So when the school ended...

Turag: *came home*

Domagoy: Hi, rag master

Turag: Don't call me rag master!

Domagoy: What happened in the school?

Turag: oh nothing...

Domagoy: Did they bug you again? c:<

Turag: shut up, everything is fine. *starts speaking so that Domagoy doesn't hear* Except that the people are xenophobic.

Domagoy: Whaat? :0

Turag: nothing you just heard it from..outside

Domagoy: Hmmm.... *realizes that once again Turag is saying something stupid* why do I have to have a brother who is all weird?

Turag: I'm not weird!! >:I

Domagoy: *sighs*

Turag: *gets his bag off and goes outside*

Domagoy: where are you going?

Turag: somewhere, I dunno, outside.

Domagoy: ok, bye.

Turag: bye...

At Howard's house

Turag: Why do people hate it when I share affection I mean it's so stupid, they don't know about my love powers.

Howard: Love powers? You g*y?

Turag: Shut up! I just like cute and I can share it. Plus, I like girls. Especially those who always protected me. Now they're crap because some boys some with flashing shoes and gloves and wear clothes and just like to talk about stupid sports.

Howard: But sports are like general culture, you must know it.

Turag: I don't care about sports and those stupid circular objects that just hit me in the face.

Howard: You mean because you don't know how to play football?

Turag: Yeah that. And I'm not even interested in that crap! Football has nothing variable, editable, factorizable. You can't do anything that requires a piece of brain. Especially imagination for composing music and making videogames about epic furries and art.

Howard: Ahh well, you have to adjust.

Turag: I guess, but that's gonna be hard because I don't like it ^^' plus remember what happened when they asked me to tell a player from Shestero, I didn't know any.

Howard: Hahaha yeah :D

Turag: Stupid footcrap.

Howard: hahahah XD footcrap

Turag: yea I can put crap on my foot and hit it all around. But I hate it cuz it stinks and I like to have clean paws :3 *chuckles*

Howard: did you see how Philip cuddled with Iva?

Turag: Cuddled!? *feels jealous* They are just together because they have surnames Hill and Hilly.

Howard: yea just like you cuddled with Melitta

Turag: Yeah ^w^ but she left because she had to move >:I

Howard: hahaha bad luck

Turag: Yeah, I hate luck because I don't have luck.

Howard: What did you do that night when she had a sleepover?

Turag: Well I... *smiles and makes a kitty smile from resisting the smiling* uhh talked about how I like her because she's cute and because I feel great from her energy. I cuddled with her and purred and had a cute sleep

Howard: You mostly liked girls that have water element

Turag: yeah :)

Howard: Wanna watch TV?

Turag: sure

// Later when when Turag came to Luki's flat

Turag: hi :3

// The foxcat was in Luki's house.
// Luki was a gray

Luki: oh hi :) what brings you here?

Turag: eh, I'm bored and my stupid brother is being stupid XD

Luki: *giggles* hahah

Turag: s2pid

Luki: hahahahahahah s2pid

Turag: yea.

Luki: s2pid s3pid s4pid s5pid s6pid hahaha X3 s6pid

Turag: it sounds like... X33333

Luki: yeah! XD

Turag: stupid Helena who is cute a the same time doesn't want me to share affection with her.

Luki: maybe she doesn't like your style.

Turag: my style is always the same. I use my catchphrases that I use in my talents and works.

Luki: yea I like that.

Turag: thank you, buddy :3

Luki: np :)

Turag: *hugs*

Luki: X3

Turag: so what's gonna be our new game?

Luki: you talked about Scam Destroyers

Turag: yeah :3 we go and destroy Scamguy X3

Luki: who's that?

Turag: It's that boy from a cartoon who scams people for money.

Luki: ohhhh :)

Turag: so let's make that we are in the game :)

Luki: What are ya gonna use?

Turag: This epek game creator. Just install this magazine version and we'll make it :) *shows a CD*

Luki: ok :) *goes to the PC*

// Later when they went to the PC

Turag and Luki: *watching videos online*

Luki: *looks at the clock* ooh my time is over, I have to go study.

Turag: ok, see ya :)

// When the foxcat came home...

Turag: *removes all his clothes and goes to the bed to have a cute nap*
:iconzvoc47:
Hey! Guess who's back! :3
Anyways, this is now a new story with new original characters which I'm gonna be drawing soon :3
The story is based on my real situations, but also on situations that I'd like to happen :)

All characters are by me and are not based on any fan base
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=RoninHunt0987 Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
=3 sweet nice job
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~Zvoc47 Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
see how I expanded the RP?
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=RoninHunt0987 Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
X3 yus
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~Zvoc47 Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X3 goooooood
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=RoninHunt0987 Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
=3
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